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Friday, September 30, 2011

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY!!! YAY POST#5

I love Flash Fiction Friday. One picture, one-hundred words, no more, no less. This week I decided to continue the story from last week's Flash Fiction Friday. For a recap click this link http://heavenliegheldeen.blogspot.com/2011/09/flash-fiction-friday_23.html?zx=b4b7b17d632e46cd.



Escaping the Sentinels, Benjamin pulled Kerrie into a darkened, empty warehouse. The shock of her confession fused into anger. She was a tracker: trained from birth, for one reason and one reason only; to kill Satyrs.

“On your knees.”  His growl sent chills down to her core. Aside from being exceptional lovers, Satyrs had a reputation for being ruthless killers.

“I’m so sorry.” Without question, she took to her knees, waiting his punishment. As he placed the blindfold on her, frightened, she reached for him.

“I’m not going to kill you. You want my forgiveness? Show me just how badly.”

5 comments:

  1. Loved it. So does he forgive her? And just what does she have to do to get it? Nicely done.

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  2. I loved it. I like how you carried the story over to this week. Very intriguing! I hope you carry the story over to next week, too. Well done!

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  3. I'll take a satyr...or two. Where can I order one? And do they come with that rock hard chest or is that an add on?

    GREAT JOB HEAVEN!!

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