Sunday, September 25, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday!!!

It's another Six Sentence Sunday. After being arrested for D.U.I and her husband John bailing her out, we find Rene in a not so good mood. One small remark from Etta sends Rene over a violent edge. Rahovart stands back watching the altercation between mother and step-daughter.


Every hit landed harder than the previous one. Watching the hate René had for Etta in her eyes aroused me.That is, until a single tear fell from Etta’s frightened brown eyes. Something in me awoke as the tear splattered on the floor. A feeling I hadn’t encountered for as long as I could remember: rage. I suddenly had the urge to protect Etta.
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6 comments:

  1. Bonni SansomSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    You can feel the shift of emotion in this piece. Excellent six.

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  2. TessaSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    Love it. I cannot WAIT to read this book!

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  3. Cynthia ArsuagaSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    Interesting six. Felt all the emotions switch from one sentence to the next.

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  4. Katie HarperSeptember 25, 2011 at 12:42 PM

    ALL RIGHT THAT IS IT!!! You have to tell me, does Etta tame Rahovart? Does Rahovart fall in love with Etta? If you don't email me and tell me I'm gonna, I'm gonna, well I don't know what I'll do but it will be bad.

    I seriously can't wait to read this book!!!

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  5. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    LOl at Katie's comment. But I agree. It sounds very good. Are these women super naturals? Or just one pissed of chick whooping the ass of another? Inquiring minds want to know.

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    Such strong emotion. I love it! Great job!

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