THE RETURN
“Adam?”
“Yes, Eve?”
“What happened to everything? What happened to Eden?”
“Man has grown.” Adam clenched her hand tightly within his in an attempt to comfort his mate. Eve desperately search her surroundings in hopes to find of remnant of the home she once knew and loved.
“But where are all of the beautiful trees, the rainbow of wildflowers? Where are all of god’s creatures, Adam?”
“They had to move to give way for man’s progress.”
“I’m scared Adam.”
“Have no fear Eve, for the rain tells us God is still near and I am forever with you.”
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Beautiful, but so sad!
ReplyDeleteAww - lovely
ReplyDeleteI agree with the two comments above. It was beautiful. Excellent FFF post!
ReplyDeleteHeaven, this is touching and it's interesting how we both saw the picture similiarly. I too wrote about Adam & Eve. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteSad... :( Very effective!
ReplyDeleteVery touching and sweet. Eve was still such an innocent
ReplyDeleteI found this to be so powerful. Beautiful and sad.
ReplyDeleteHow horrible it must have been for Adam and Eve. Great job Miss Heaven!!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for your kind comments! It means alot coming from such stellar authors as yourselves!
ReplyDeleteVery poignant, great stuff.
ReplyDeleteVery good. I love it.
ReplyDeleteAhh, the beginning of mankind. What HAVE we done? Loved it:) xo
ReplyDeleteI really love your take on the photo. Makes you think...
ReplyDeleteNice job, I like how you combined the spiritual with the secular.
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