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Friday, September 16, 2011

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY!



THE RETURN


“Adam?” 

“Yes, Eve?”

“What happened to everything? What happened to Eden?”

“Man has grown.” Adam clenched her hand tightly within his in an attempt to comfort his mate. Eve desperately search her surroundings in hopes to find of remnant of the home she once knew and loved.

“But where are all of the beautiful trees, the rainbow of wildflowers? Where are all of god’s creatures, Adam?”

“They had to move to give way for man’s progress.”

“I’m scared Adam.”

“Have no fear Eve, for the rain tells us God is still near and I am forever with you.”

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14 comments:

  1. I agree with the two comments above. It was beautiful. Excellent FFF post!

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  2. Heaven, this is touching and it's interesting how we both saw the picture similiarly. I too wrote about Adam & Eve. Nicely done.

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  3. Very touching and sweet. Eve was still such an innocent

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  4. I found this to be so powerful. Beautiful and sad.

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  5. How horrible it must have been for Adam and Eve. Great job Miss Heaven!!

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  6. Thank you everyone for your kind comments! It means alot coming from such stellar authors as yourselves!

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  7. Ahh, the beginning of mankind. What HAVE we done? Loved it:) xo

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  8. I really love your take on the photo. Makes you think...

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  9. Nice job, I like how you combined the spiritual with the secular.

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